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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 20 years ago
Very nice

I think you could lose the first line, otherwise it sizzles!

BlueskyBeautyBlueskyBeautyalmost 20 years ago
i agree

lose the first line and it becomes a stronger take off..the second line is a great opener.

very nice read! ty

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