All Comments on 'Flying'

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Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 18 years ago
Evolution

Very beautiful work, Ent. It made me think of a butterfly emerging from the cocoon to fly free, leaving the hard shell of its former life behind. Congrats.

hugo_samhugo_samover 18 years ago
Emerging

The spirit emerging from the shadows to soar as it should. Joyous, hopefull poem. Well done. Great, happy feelling.

Thank you.

LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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A different style

Not quite conventional

The gasping exhiliration of release...

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Beautiful words...

... from a beautiful soul.

*hugs* Lizzy

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Flying indeed

This piece is all the more emotional because I know it comes right from the heart. It tells honestly of your feelings at a time of change and I think it will touch more readers than you could have guessed when you wrote it.

Thank you for sharing it.

Chris

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