All Comments on 'For Today's Youth'

but I'm not sure it's a poem. Keep writing

Yes, it's most certainly a poem.

Poems don't have to rhyme.

They don't have to keep the same rhythm.

Poems are merely

Condensed thought.

The whole art of poetry is

to convey your idea

in precisely as many words as needed,

...but no more.

I think it does that admirably,

and with a great message, to boot!

Thanks for the wonderful message!

Write more! :-)