All Comments on 'Irren'

Best I've seen from you, and the rest where very good

as a lead line, this is OK, but the poem deserves better.

"A distant scream, primal urgency"

Like the title - caught my eye

The museing understated style, excellent counterbalace to the quotes

"And as a poet, his lies."... worse, most of them beleive 'em

Very good

Enjoyed the poem. 1201 says it all.

b'brig

I read this several times and each time it got better and better. It's an intelligent poem with many facets. I think it will be with me for a while.

Very good writing as usual. I think I've missed a couple of your new ones, and now I need to go look them up. :)

and agree with all the comments left......nice job.....don

that this is a very

intelligent poem,

extremely well written

and i really enjoyed

reading it.

thanks.

~ J

word play in English

But here is a word play in German, I could almost sense the pun, but I did have to research to really understand.

Yes, lunatics are humans.

This is a clever and intelligent poem.