All Comments on 'Lit a Match on Your Zipper'

by Lyricalli

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Levitating_BedLevitating_Bedalmost 4 years ago
How does one secure membership in the Church of Salty Prayer?

Ain't no maybes here at all, this is hot as a match head.

And the crowd goes Y K K !

And the crowd goes Y K K !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Muy caliente! Great build up and flows like lava!

Well done Callie! I much enjoyed reading it. :-)

~ Angie

champagne1982champagne1982almost 4 years ago
I felt

the forge fire as your words made me ready for the smith's hammer.

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I've been writing poetry for about eight years, and it's all Lit's fault.