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Click hereA softness enveloping,
a warmth exciting,
sensation on sensation.
Touches that arouse yet relax.
A reality unknown
until you.
Myself. At last myself.
A rightness
that leaves me speechless;
a coming home
that brings tears of release;
a joining of eye, hand and mouth
that means
myself. At last, myself.
Your soft, sinking flesh
a perfect match
for my hard, rising desire,
as my hands and mouth
follow a pattern previously unknown,
yet so familiar
it requires no thought.
Myself. At last, myself.
A sureness in every touch,
kiss,
caress
as I revel in the delights of your body.
Excited, calmed, roused - at peace.
Myself. At last, myself.
to connect. a huge sappy smile from me to you. as others have said...'awesome job' and i do so hope you continue on.
I love everything you write.
Maybe I'm biased... but I love it. :)
Awesome darling, simply awesome.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoox.
Keep going. :)
I love the way all the adjectives seem to jostle against each other: hard, calm, peaceful, etc.
Kool with a capital K!
Beautfully written. The word spacing makes it impossible NOT to jump from one word to the next. Am now going to look at some of your other work.
with some good phrasing and a nice pace to it. I like the line "touches that arouse yet relax", a nice description of those gentle caresses that can achieve both. I also liked the gender ambiguity of...
"Your soft, sinking flesh
a perfect match
for my hard, rising desire,"
...with it's obvious meaning to a man and yet still applicable to a woman, it helps keep the audience open. Lovely, babe.
Sorry I'm just getting to this one, Mat. You know how I feel about the realization of self. Strong stuff. XOXOXOX
Mat this is a beautiful poem - the content, structure, everything! Touched all the right places for me!