- Erotic Poetry
- Need
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my fingers
gently
lightly
oh so softly
trail down your chest
my palm
resting
just where your heart beats
smells
like a piece of heaven
dark
masculine
entirely erotic
a mixture of spices
that teases and tempts
the pallet
lightly
my lips touch
nibbling
tasting
searching
against yours
drinking the moment
arching
needing to be closer
body to body
heart to heart
scorched
by the feel
and wanting to burn
more
languid
in slow patterns
my hands learn
the symphony of you
bold one moment
retreating the next
in this opus of seduction
contrast
masculine
feminine
curves
yielding against hard contours
delightful differences
sparking
the want of more
delight
in the way you respond
soft moans
tense muscles
tightening nipples
as my mouth explores
descending
down
my eyes on yours
my fingers fumbling
in this passion filled moment
feeling you
hot
hard
sleek
entirely male
as my hand cups
fingers
tightly fisted
in my hair
as I run my tongue
just against the tip
slowly
circling
until my mouth surrounds
with velvety smoothness
breath
hissing
from between your lips
as my mouth
discovers
your unique
flavor
eyes
darkening
impossibly intense
as you sink your body
beside mine
lips
meet
in this dark battle
no quarter given
taking
devouring
deepening
as limbs tangle
hands
cup
my heavy breasts
nipples tweaking
under knowing fingers
mind blanking
please
the word whispers
through my lips
arching up
burning
needing
wanting
spiraling to some unknown
slick
with need
your fingers dive
into my core
building
stroking
setting me on fire
as gasps fill the air
mouths
meet again
in this primitive dance
your body hovering above me
with one slick moment
we are one
joined
stretched
fulfilled
with you embedded deep
in
out
in again
in a rhythm as old as time
eyes
locked
as passion mounts
faster
deeper
fingers digging
bodies straining
thrumming
surging
for the moment that is to come
feeling
you swell
deep
my body answering
in a shudder
we tumble
heedlessly
together
over the edge of oblivion
waves
of pleasure coursing
until nothing is heard
but the sound of our hearts
beating
- COMMENTS
jthserraabout 20 years agoduring my first pass, but didn't comment for some reason. I was a bit torn on this one. I found it very erotic, yet nicely subdued which I don't see enough of here a literotica. I do think, the poem would have more impact if you reduced by about half. I really liked what you did with this stanza:
"languid
in slow patterns
my hands learn
the symphony of you
bold one moment
retreating the next
in this opus of seduction"
I like the musical metaphor here and wish you had continued with it, working it throughout the poem. I think a focus on something like this would also help trimming to just the barest essentials of this poem.
Either way, well done.
jim : )
Syndra Lynnabout 20 years agoI'm horny most of the time anyway but this really made me hot.
Thanks for the wet panties!
