by VoyeuristicMinx
poem, sexy and covers all the bases,
"So please
Be brave
Let's misbehave" says it well and all---
the final lines
"Together
Forever
Me and you." might be cut, why? because it makes the poem less erotic, less sexy and more personal and naive. just my take. Perhaps I err but in my experience almost nothing erotic can last forever except youthful hopes and wishes and memories....