All Comments on 'Sonnet 5'

"Divine enchantment - that's my position -/

Does slay me, violates my volition": Yea Yea, Been there burned there...Great two ending lines to another smart very good poem. Frankly, I found myself crossing my fingers when I was reading this one, praying that it won't be a flop (it happened to be the last of the four I was reading). Who was I kidding? Thanks and welcome!

Nanette, You are striking a very poignant note, but rich and textured. These works put your emotions out there for all of us to feel. Congratulations.

You are a skilled writer, Nanette. This is a fine Sonnet, very much appreciated by this reader.

My particular favorite, of your four submissions, for the assonance in its rhyme structure. It softens the rhyme which seems to heighten the emotional turmoil contained within this sonnet's theme.