All Comments on 'Stroke'

Mentioned on the new poems thread on the poetry forum.

I really love this poem's structure. Every word seems to be positioned exactly where it belongs and yet the overall effect ranges from a breathless reading rush suggesting overwhelminging emotions dashing helter skelter everywhere with no place to hide, to a slow, pondering, energyspent line by solitary line dirge.<br><br>

I love it.

Talk about the tearing apart of the season's spirit; some couples, families just can't handle it — felt the turmoil.

Five.