All Comments on 'Summer Interlude'

by brillobob

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WickedEveWickedEveover 19 years ago
this has some

great images. Love "like a china teacup falling on tile floor."

Bridget69Bridget69over 19 years ago
Outstanding!

Such wonderful sensual imagery. I especially loved this part,

"little bumps, rise like Braille dots to be read by fingertips." Also liked the addition of the intrusive interruption at the end.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleover 19 years ago
mention

Your Poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the journey

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