All Comments on 'Surrender'

by moonlight elf

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Surrendering

Sometimes it can be dangerous to surrender all to one person, but love is a powerful thing. So are your words. Just lovely Elf.

~mlady

sophia janesophia janeabout 19 years ago
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I understand this exactly (I'm there now actually!)- great words Moonie!

loneeagle308loneeagle308about 19 years ago
Nice~!

A very compelling view on Love that I hope will be mutually received back at you soon.

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Taleabout 19 years ago
mention

Your poem was mentioned on the thread

"New Poems Reviews"

thanks for the exhilarating literary journey ...(~_~) Art~

Bridget69Bridget69about 19 years ago
Lovely.

A powerful piece about wanting to reach one's inner revelations and trusting unconditionally.

angelicminxangelicminxabout 19 years ago
Lovely Elfie

Simply lovely. You captured the power and insecurity of being in love. Kisses! ~Minx

LeetahLeetahabout 19 years ago
Wow...

Your writing is wonderful. I am thoroughly impressed, and tip my hat to you.

Honey123Honey123almost 19 years ago
Positively beautiful!

The words, the images that you bring to the mind. I wish I had one ounce of your talent!

~Honey

fairysongfairysongover 18 years ago
Powerful Poetry Moonie!

Brings to life ones hopes and fears about love, the risks and that leap of faith. The emotional whirlwind before the surrender.

~Tink

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