by moonlight elf
Sometimes it can be dangerous to surrender all to one person, but love is a powerful thing. So are your words. Just lovely Elf.
~mlady
I understand this exactly (I'm there now actually!)- great words Moonie!
A very compelling view on Love that I hope will be mutually received back at you soon.
Your poem was mentioned on the thread
"New Poems Reviews"
thanks for the exhilarating literary journey ...(~_~) Art~
A powerful piece about wanting to reach one's inner revelations and trusting unconditionally.
Simply lovely. You captured the power and insecurity of being in love. Kisses! ~Minx
Your writing is wonderful. I am thoroughly impressed, and tip my hat to you.
The words, the images that you bring to the mind. I wish I had one ounce of your talent!
~Honey
Brings to life ones hopes and fears about love, the risks and that leap of faith. The emotional whirlwind before the surrender.
~Tink