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i know im way late on this and it doesnt make a difference now, but i feel like you use the persons name too often, when you could just say she or her. there were some times when you would use soo or tess' name 5 or 6 times one after the other when you could have used she or her sometime

Loved the description of Soo. Made me envious of Tess. Love them Eastern native women. Beautiful creation truly enjoy reading your work.

Even in an all girl school, never got that opportunity. wish I had a teacher like you. Maybe then I wouldn't be a horney unfulfilled woman.

some day, I know I'll feel the the soft arms of a woman encircling me from behind, nuzzeling my neck and teaching me the bliss that is love between women.

Excellent story.

I love your writing.