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Chequamegonover 8 years agoGood story
Really liked your story. There are a few minor typos to check but overall great story. Can't wait to read the rest.
asianToyover 8 years agoA good start
Well done and with some character development. I hope this story has a conclusion.
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lostindavoidover 8 years agoAuthorTo asianToy
Glad you liked part one. I just submitted part five last night. Hope you keep reading.
Avengiumabout 4 years agoInteresting story
I'm liking your story. Keeps getting more interesting with new chapters.
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