by 40DayDream
Once again a well done story from what looks to be a promising author. Story was quick and witty, it felt like a full read not just jumbled together time line or a stuttering retell of events. Flow of the story also seemed right, could probably have been a little longer and descriptive, but a fun quick little read on a sunday with a lot of white shit on the ground.
5/5 looking forward to next in your series
The most unlikely people sometimes get together, and it can be good, balancing each other out. This compelling story reaches into a human heart and turns it on, even though it may not turn on the human body as much.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. Thank you for sharing.
What is it with small women? WHY do you writers place your characters under five foot four? It's such an emotional turn off for me as a reader.
Your stories seem to be pure romance with the sex thrown in just as an afterthought. Not that I'm complaining.
After reading a few of those damsel in distress and knights in shining armor type stories in this category, this was a refreshingly different piece.
5stars, please continue being this awesome.
Thank you, Author, for this very funny bit.
Laughter is still the best remedy.
Further adventures would be great, love and laughter go perfect together.
If it's any solace, you're cancelled out by those of us who consider it to be hot.
:-)
Very enjoyable content & characters to read about, I had some confusion when you changed between the 2 characters but I caught on during the second read through and found it much more fun. You have attractive writing skills and with continued work plus a good editor you'll become a favorite. BRAVO!
FUNNY GAVE ME A LIFT AND IT GAVE HIM WELL YOU KNOW VISITS TO E R PLUS LOTZLOVING
RON
Sorta close to home!
Was involved with a young dancer of much the same manner! Spent much time at the hospital with her! Her injuries, not mine!
Thanks for the story, it was fun, as was my time with her!
I love it, no boring BS and realistic fun of a large variety.
BRAVO!!!
Yeah, those ben-wa balls are dangerous alright. I’m just glad I wasn’t eating or drinking anything, I would have either choked to death or blown it out my nose. It’s a funny story. I believe it’s a five star story too, in spite of the rushed ending.
Hilarious. I loved the inputs from Kitty. One of the few stories that I have ever read more than once.