All Comments on '1 London 2007'

Wow. The conversation in the backalley was awesome. Realy erotic. That doesn't mean I did not like the rest.

Thanks. I just read this entire story and really had no idea how many grammatical errors there were. I'm so embarrassed because there's an English major in my family, so I should know better! I didn't think I needed someone else to proof read for me. My mistake. ;)

Now that I've looked back at this story, there's so much I would have changed. I don't like this story very much anymore, not as much as I did when I was writing it.