All Comments on '11-13.avi; or, The Engagement Ring'

and grow a pair......TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm more captured by the beauty of the words then the story itself. You've left me intrigued and aroused in three pages. The story was cruel, sexy, haunting and orgasmic all in one go. You sir (well I think you are a man) are a brilliant writer. Kudos to you.

I'm more captured by the beauty of the words then the story itself. You've left me intrigued and aroused in three pages. The story was cruel, sexy, haunting and orgasmic all in one go. You sir (well I think you are a man) are a brilliant writer. Kudos to you. Can't wait for your next story.

Depressing =( beautiful messed up story though...now i feel depressed too.

sad guy

A true garbsge story sorry i resd it.

Seriously, get some therapy

i couldnt cum to this, but this was great as prose and as a story! dont listen to the haters. you might wanna work on punctuation because i noticed some phrases were turned into sentences, though i suppose that could have been for dramatic effect. xoxo