All Comments on '14 Hours Pt. 01'

Just holy shit. This is so well done. I don't even know where to start. I haven't read the later parts yet but I hope there's just one really well described sex scene. The scenes done were perfect for the story, though. I fucking love this one.

So glad I found you. Great writing!

Thank you:)

Ed

This was great. With the exception of the (scientifically inaccurate) slut-shaming.... "Kori was smaller framed if a little pudgier, but I'd wager the fact she wasn't an admitant whore was a factor." Kind of a turn-off and took me out of the moment. otherwise, I loved it.

Very good start, I like it.

Got me hooked. What can I say, I like it and the story is getting interesting so I'll jump on over to the next chapter and see how it goes. Thanks.