All Comments on '16th Century Slave Market Pt. 02'

Just beautiful.

This paints a picture for all the senses, it is extremely well written.

Beautifully written, wonderfully subtle, but complex word pictures. Can't wait to read more! Thank You

The romantic encounter at the end left me breathless. I have read all your stories. This is the best!

You really need to do a part 3!!

Absolutely amazing. Do you intend on continuing?

but I've distracted myself with other pieces, 'Kristin Continued' and '48 Hours on the Swallow.' I will have a hard time topping the sweet ending of Slave Market. Carina really has nowhere to go. I think I will follow another group of slaves to the Avret Bazaar in Constantinople. Thank you!

coming soon. It should be ready in a few weeks. It will follow a slave ship to the market in Constantinople.

The story isn't one that draws me in. I prefer more contemporary stuff. What has kept me reading, so far, is the quality of your writing - the flow and cadence, grammar, use of language, keeping to the plot. It's right at the top of the best I've read on Literotica (perhaps you are a professional?). The only author I've encountered on this site, so far but over a few years, whose writing is high quality, is a story by . . . I forget, but the title is, I think, 'I've got (or had or have) an idea.'

I appreciate your kind words. I am not a professional writer! The next chapter of this series will be up in a few weeks. It takes place in Constantinople.

I love the slave harem stories. This one is beautiful. Please continue to chapter 3.

thanks

I loved this story as much, but in a different way, than 48 hours. Your style of writing in both stories is stunning.

I always felt in another life that I was a slave in a harem. So this would probably be my favorite. I hope you keep writing more stories and parts. Again, thank you.

I love this story. Especially the passion between Carina and Philippe!

Beautiful blend of sweetness, bitterness, and lustfulness. Each transition was smooth and allowed the reader/observer to stay completely in the story. I'll be reading everything you write.

After these years have passed, I still consider this story and this Part my best effort. Thank you all for the compliments.