All Comments on '18 Only: Problem Child!!!'

When Literotica posted this story, they omitted the first line.

The first line of this story should read:

'My daughter Amber has always been a handful.'

I am trying to get this updated. Thanks for your patience.

MPP

I had to rate this story to post, so I rated it 50 in all fairness. Cheers.

I liked this story and I liked how you turned her from a whore back into his little girl. I have to admit it would have been cool if you had actually put some graphics in on the guys fucking her but other then that it was a great story.

this story really brings out the hate and love of a father. it also made me extremely stiff.

I didn't like this one at all.

...but I liked it. LOL. I did find myself giggling...cuz...what father would actually do that. But, what a great way to correct her insidious behavior.

different but i really liked it. i really doubt that it would have worked any other way.

That's taking Tough Love to a whole new level... But, with some cases, that is probably about the only thing that would work... MPP, you have outdone yourself... AGAIN... Thanks for a Great Story...

wrong,too wrong....not good.how could u even think of something like this

& completely unrealistic

you obviously dont have kids....because if you did and you read this, you'd want to puke.

It kept me going. I had to know how it ended. Good job of peaking interest. Dr.Phil would never agree with your method but it made for a great Literotica read.

I liked it. Thanks..for the kink.

Good Story, albeit a bit unreal. But a good read nevertheless.

This was a pretty solid story there are elements of it that most people wouldn't like (the father having sex with his daughter) but that doesn't stop it from being well written. Some people say it's urealistic or disgusting but they just have to realize it's a father doing anything it takes to save his daughter,some hard-headed people have to feel it to belive it.

Sorry if my English is not good. I love this story. I think because it almost made sense.

Incest fantasy can be fun as fantasy, not realistic. I dont know if I believe a man, not sexually abusing a child but could make love like this to her, but I do believe if he did, and really love her, it would be like you wrote.

Anyway a very very good story.

this is disgusting. truly vile.

at first i was like o.o

but then i lol'd

I really enjoyed this story...so much, but then I do love non consent, so I had no issues with anything they 'did' to her....such a naughty girl should be punished and taught how to behave correctly.....I would almost certainly be this naughty if I thought I would be punished in such a way....yes please.

interesting and quite different

I loved this, so NOT what I was searching for, but I was totally gripped....lol

Very talented xx

I'm majorly going to have to disagree with whoever said this was 'way over the top and vile' because it wasn't. I don't think I would've gone as far as the Father fucking her but, all together. It was a good read, not my fave. But definetly one I'll read again.

Keep writing.

Pay a guy to drill your little girl and shit on her.

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That makes sense.

This story was strange. Rape is rape, and not cool. Shitting on a girl is really out there. Multiple sex partners

sounds like fun.

I give a 1 to men who adopt women's names on Lit.

And refuse to read their stories.

Hated the part where her dad fucks her. Incest is a real turn off!

Although I do not agree with having your daughter fucked over and over by guys then doing her yourself to teach her a lesson the ending was lovely. But having that done to your girl would never straighten her out, just saying.

How does teaching your daughter not to be a whore by getting a bunch of guys to do but fuck her??? Isn't that exactly what he was trying to get her NOT to do???

It's called 'Too Much Of A Good Thing!' Pretty creative story. I'd like to see another along the same vein.

Loved this story. Please write many more. In real life too many girls and women get hooked on sex and sell themselves. Too bad parents didn't plan this up to get their daughters to become respectable women again.

Not much action and what there was of it was slow and boring...Not as good or hot as Daughter Swap...

i DONT KNOW HOW ANYONE COULD READ SUCH DISGUSTING LITURATURE ALL I WAS TRYING TO FIND WAS SOME KINKY SHIT AND I RAN INTO THIS TABOO PAGE DISGUSTING !

This is by far one of the worst stories I've ever read. Absolute rubbish and I'm not referring to horrible shit that takes place. Clearly the author opted for extreme shock value which might have worked if everything wasn't so predictable. I think a story, even one with such vile subject matter, could be considerd a good story if written by a more skilled and talented writer.

I loved this! Though you have many negative comments, I applaud you! :)

It's fucked up. But endearing. It makes rape and incest rape justified. Not literally, but it makes it seem that way.

It's just all across the board.

This story is immensely unrealistic, and unintentionally a good example of that the road to hell is paved with good intentions because this sort of treatment is wildly unlikely to result in the ending of this fic.

That said, this is just a fic and I've enjoyed far more cartoony dumb fics than this, here on this site.

This somehow isn't my cup of tea because it to me somehow reads as being too close to being deluded, rather than just intentionally unreal. but it definitely got me to read until the end, and the fic kept me wondering what would happen even though the actual happy end seemed a given (though I kept hoping it would be played straight instead of the fairy tale end). So all in all, I have no regrets about reading this. I just wish it had been done better. Either more cartoony or more realistic.

Addiction is s disease.Would You treat someone with diabetes this way

I don't have a problem with nonconsent as a fantasy or even incest fics, but this was pretty ridiculous. How would treating your daughter like a whore straighten her out? The incest part came from nowhere. The father had been pretty paternal up until that point. There was very little action, and the action that there was was pretty vanilla (aside from some tame buttfucking). It's not great, but it's not terrible.

This was handled in a rough way but it seems to have worked (yes, I know that it is just a story). Thank you for writing.

May be a weird or unconventional practice but not a horrible story. If you don't like the type of story then don't read it no need for negative comments.

Dude its porn it does not need to make sense

Great fantasy. It reminds me of when my daughter was 18 and asked me if a friend of hers, also 18, could move in with us because her parents had thrown her out. I was reluctant because it was just me and my daughter. I set some house rules which they agreed to as I learned she liked to party. It didn't take long, and she was flirting with me when my daughter was at her part-time job and we were alone. She'd wear short skirts with no panties. My willpower crumbled, and we had sex. I loved going down on her honey pot. That is how she earned her allowance. Her parents eventually took her back. It was a great summer.