All Comments on '18th Birthday Mom Fuck'

Put down the thesaurus and make it flow more naturally, will be a much better read.

Thanks

But a bit too wordy. I mean in your opening segment, he states he can feel his balls rest on her ass cheeks.... but she’s bent over at the waist. Though your imagery is great, your writing is getting in its own way. Not bad though, but please keep it up.

All mothers and sons should experience such uninhibited love

I enjoyed this sensual writing. I hope you have more chapters to share.

Yes, his Mom knew what she wanted and how to get it. Hopefully, they'll screw each other a lot when he's home from college and it will get stronger from there. I wonder if she would like to suck him off too ??

More please - thanks !!

Like a previous comment said... Balls on ass cheeks, but bent at the waist leaning over the counter top? Unless your balls are on top of your dick, that's not possible. Things like that can really ruin the imagery of the story.

Loved the Mother & Son tenderness.

A loving time between Mother and son

Hope you will continue the story.

Envious of this young man

Love this one, Leo! I really envied this young man, Ian, for the pure love that he and his Mom discovered so suddenly, but so deeply. The whole story develops so believably, even if it was sudden. And we know that it is the kind of mom/son love that will last and grow. I had a hard crush on my own mother when I was a young man and I would have given anything to have been able to have sex with her. I know that it would have worked out as real love as well. As it was, I had a vivid sex life through my beloved Mom in masturbatory fantasy and even yet in memory.

And it was very well written. thanks for the read

Nice story. Well told. I look forward to the next chapters.

put the ending at beginning.

AA,,sZSS-,☆,

As someone said three years ago, don't start with the climax of the story.

Enjoyed a lot to read about how u fucked her..