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All Comments on '1942 - Poignant Picnic'

by MarcoTambo

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 6 years ago
Tender story of love

More soldiers need such a beautiful send off. The only thing better if mom gave him similar experience to remember.

honybipolahonybipolaover 6 years ago
still a fan

of your sibling romance stories in different varieties...your writings has humor and fun to read as always...

SandMan29331SandMan29331over 6 years ago
Please continue this.

It was a great story, and I enjoyed it a lot. I would to read the fallout as a result of the mass email he sent, as well as more stories of him as his sister.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Nice story but having her fuck her boss was a negative. It did not help the story.

Did he and Jenny ever discuss the daughter's birth.

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
I enjoyed the story, but not the fact that his sister was not a virgin and had fucked her boss.

Also, was he the father on her first child or not? He said he figured that he would be the father. Did he and Jenny stay close after he returned from the war.?

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
NOT BAD, BUT !!!!!! ^*!^*!^*!

It needs a proof reader, that would,

make it an easyer to read.

..THANKS..

AndreasVonGlatzAndreasVonGlatzover 3 years ago

Traurig gibt es ein happy end?

outlaw29coutlaw29calmost 2 years ago

This is a great story!! It sounds like some of my war stories. Except my sister was not in that nice

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