All Comments on '1982: Exploring into the Taboo Zone'
by gggsss1962
- 18 Comments
Anonymousabout 17 years agoBeing mostly Italian and being from Parma , I fell in love with your story .Modena is the home of Pavarotti and Stradivarius etc etc so you told a very acceptable tale . I also had a similar episode with my first cousin many years ago although not in Italy . You brought back happy memories. Thanks
Anonymousabout 17 years agoThank you for sharing your story and for doing it in English for our benefit. Your foreign way of expressing the feelings and actions of the characters lent the whole a fascinating freshness which a writer with English as a first language could never duplicate so please keep writing the way you do! Once again, many thanks gggsss1962!
Anonymousover 16 years agoIt was a great story. Not your typical erotic story, but one that was very believable. It was well writen, and was easy to put yourself right in the story. It was fun, and thanks for the excitement, and enjoyment.
Anonymousover 16 years agoWould have loved to see them go all the way, but the build-up to the oral sex was well-done.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoIve never read any thing like this before. My husband turned me onto to this genre of reading. I have to say it was so well written it was almost believable. I really enjoyed it and it made for a good nite between me and my husband
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoThis was awesome. Imma read the next chapter right now. I simply loved this. Keep 'em coming.
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoNow I have to cover the bulge in my shorts as I walk away from the computer.
Anonymousover 14 years agoI especially enjoyed the descriptions of Rome--the sensuality of the landscape and the landmarks--intermixed with the erotic descriptions of the lovemaking. Very nicely done. It could do with an edit by a native English speaker to get rid of some of the errors in usage, grammar, and spelling. Otherwise a hit. Thank you very much.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agothis reads like a first draft that was written by a 10 year old that doesn't speak english. i got a head ache on the first page no way i will ever finish unless you get your sorry ass in gear and do a rewrite using a good editor.
SHOW SOME PRIDE IN YOUR WORK AND A LOT OF RESPECT FOR THE READERS AND ALWAYS USE A GOOD EDITOR BEFORE POSTING. NOW DELETE THIS GARBAGE AND DO IT RIGHT OR DON'T DO IT AT ALL.
Anonymousover 12 years agoReading this story really gave me a sense of the taboo zone. It Was so well written I actually felt like I was in the story. Reading it was an experiance that will continue to leave me wondering. Wondering, what exactly the taboo zone really is like.
Anonymousover 12 years agoNicely done, I like it. Needs a little work on grammer and spelling but who doesnt.
Let us know when u get back together.
Anonymousabout 12 years agowhat kind of nonenglish loser wrote this trash and why did they post it here? i couldn't even finish the first page it was to painful to try and figure out what the loser was saying. way to many wrong words and other STUPID errors. do all readers a favor and delete all stories and never post again.
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoCan someone tell this shithead,for Gods sake, that he cannot write?? This is unreal ! "1*" !!!!
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoBeautiful. The only thing missing was a young cock in HIS mouth!!!
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou tell a great story that flows well. But.... always a but! Your English is way better than my Italian, but I am not into writing! I suggest you stick to writing in your native tongue or get and English speaking editor. The grammatical errors and misuse of English spoils a good story. Oh, and yes... Stella is a crap cheap beer sold at a premium price to yuppies!
