All Comments on '1st, 2nd and 3rd Person'

by milkandhoney27

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Fucken delicious

Absolutely hot, well written, would hand liked at least a different font for character change, but otherwise very hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Very clever, loved the differences in mental voice for each character, and a cliffhanger to boot. First and foremost you know how to write and the kinkiness is just the cherry on top.

DreaMajorDreaMajorabout 8 years ago

Nice, something for everyone!

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