by Ciceri
Very interesting premise. I like the idea that this is taking place in a part of the world where it's very easy to believe something like this would take place.
I hope the next installment covers things from the wife's perspective and includes some of the training she goes through. I find it particularly hot that the long-term psychological effects of the training (literally being brain-washed, broken down and rebuilt into a proper fucktoy) could lead to some very interesting encounters after she's freed. Will she find it impossible to be anything other than submissive to a man? Will her husband have to assume the role of master to help her cope with the situation and lead her back into modern society? Will the husband find that he likes having a submissive slave and not worry about "fixing" her?
Personally, I'd like to see her marked as a slave in some fashion. While I prefer large nipple rings to denote such, I'm also okay with a tattoo or branding. I can very easily see this scene being used as one step in the breaking process. Maybe after a week or two of training she gets the rings as punishment and to mark her status....
I will finish this story in three weeks and will give the wife's perspective with a twist sure to please. Thank you for reading
Don't finish the story too quickly! There are at least 6 more installments needed, I'm sure.
I really like this story, not full of curse words and actually has a plot to it other then just sex. I only wish it has been a bit longer. Can't wait to read more!