All Comments on '21st Century Subterranean Slavery Pt. 01'

this story turned me on i can't wait to see the rest.

It should be under non-erotic.

This is too far. This is horrifying.

The story is too horrifying and I think you should put less harm to the slaves.

This first chapter is very exciting and arousing. Well set up and a nice progression into the verbal picture of the story. Looking forward to reading more chapters and understanding the delicious enlargement of the story line.