All Comments on '23 Seconds...'

Beautiful. The suspense drove the story over the edge. Very well done.

I enjoyed this, well told, interesting, and arousing! great job!

I enjoyed this, well told, interesting, and arousing! great job!

Get yourself an editor, please. There are dropped words and other careless mistakes that interfere.

Very excellent. Well done. A few grammatics, but the point is that the purpose of the story isn't moot or overdone. Very well done indeed.

You get the reader right inside the mind of the woman in the story - good work!

Very tender and very, very nice/

Bravo... An excellent read - hot and to the point.

???? never seen that! Obviously the guy can't actually get an erection.

Stuck with the guy because he was the someone who finally gave you something, instead of always receiving. Otherwise, many rich guys spend more than five grands a week on their trophy wife which goes waiting the town red. You must stick to this guy : money or no money!!