All Comments on 'Three Day Weekend Revisited'

for writing a positive story about a couple, both of whom are older. If you hadn't mentioned the ages in your story description, I wouldn't have clicked on the link from the New Story list. And it's a relief to read a mature story where wrinkles, sags, and bags aren't a criteria. I would like to read more of these kind of stories, but I've become hesitant about clicking on a Mature story. Either it's about a younger man/older woman or the opposite and/or there's a physical description that's negative. The focus on your story was on the positives, both appreciating the other, the insecurities because of age, and making it a fun read. Great story.

I absolutely agree with the previous poster in all respects. May/December stories have become trite and therefore boring, and it's a real pleasure to read a story about two genuinely 'mature' lovers.

I would, however, encourage you to find an editor you can comfortably work with, to put some missing polish on your work, and to avoid some awkward errors in basics, such as not knowing then from than.