by RicoLouis
Another great chapter well worth the wait. Looking forward to what happens next
Looking forward to future chapters. Jo needs to fuck Alex....in front of everyone
thought you have given up on the story...but you are here... Work well done.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Been dealing with severe vertigo which makes writing difficult at times. Working on chapter five now which will have Alex running into Angel and fill in Jo and Alex’s time at college which will conclude the backstory.
When is Teddy and the strap-on coming back into play?....Jo, Candy, Kim or even......Alex? What is in store for Izzy and Abby?
When's the next chapter out? So looking forward to it! It's been a great novel so far and can't wait for more so hurry please!!
Next week hopefully, sent it to the editor. After that the Mods have to approve it which could take a while because of length. Already at work on volume 3 now.
so far in and still hoping for someone or all of them to take advantage of Alex's submissive side and explore it or make damn good use of it
The character development in this series is probably the most complete that I have ever read. Making the characters 3 dimensional is extremely hard. This author has accomplished. Likewise, plot/subplot is logically developed. Mentally, the reader becomes a part of the story as an observer with the ability to read minds. Alex is undoubtably the most mentally and emotionally mature individual in this story; however, he probably has too much empathy. Although I do not like time warping, this may be the only way the story works? I would like to see the author or someone to write this series in a chronically linear style. 5-stars.