by twofourthree
Ok this chapter just fucked me up for the rest of the day. Damn. 5 none the less.
Youre writing is suberb.
This thing wit Nikki was painful.
The woman are all either lesbians or at best bisexual with leaning mostly to the wanting female side.
Its a group marriage that is clear.
But its obvious none of the women would stay with him without the other woman there.
This alone would crush most men. Liz has the makings of another lesbian/bisexual.
he never cheated on Nikki, what she did however, was bad, uncertain how they will ever return to being as close as there were before. She didnt even wait hours to cheat on him after she left.
Lovely Story!
Very Well done!
Another Great Chaptter in this lovely Story!
How about a Grannie get place in the story with a loving romance with the girls too? mmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Thank you for some loving wet wet moments of true pleasure mmmmm
Aunt Helena
54yo Lesbian Aunt from Portugal
Just finished reading this tear jerker/ heart wrenching chapter. But you know what....He did the right thing! George acted thru pride....Daniel acted with love. Been there. I'm not that strong tho. His women are bisexual, but would do ANYTHING for him. Because of the love and strength he gives them. Daniel almost makes Superman look like a wimp. But he's honest with them and himself. Almost like the sailor in WWII stuck on a ship for two years and finds out his wife just had twins. You
do what you gotta do. She's his wife and their his kids. I think Lizzy gets mixed in here before long. Not sure she should, but yet I think she's part of the future. GP
What life will through at a family. Just show how important everyone is in a family.
The ups and downs, most of all real true love and devtotion is all about. Will have you counting all ones blessing.
This is the best of all story's for years to come. WOW.
Thus chapter got me! Nikki cheating, desths if loved ones. Got me feeling angry, hurt and sad all in one chapter. Dammit!
Good story, at times confusing due to grammar and mixed up names. Punctuation could be improved upon. This is the second story I am reading from you, and I like it very much. I like the fact that the stories are long and have many life events in them. I appreciate very much the fact you are including and mixing several taboo's and kinks. Keep up the good work! I am looking forward to read all your stories.
Third time i read this entire story, and i still think is't a shame that you skip pivitol moments as Eve's death, since they would have a huge impact on so many, mostly Sally, Daniel and Kat. I feel's like you are short changing them some how, anyway, i still love the story.
Daniel has to be the most responsible, mature, stable and compartmentalized adult male I have ever read about.