by xxxecil
I dont have the words. If you were to publish I'd definately buy the book. To anyone considering starting with this chapter, dont. Take the time to read the entire chain. This author is talented enough to keep you reading long after you' ve sated the initial desire that brought you to this story in the first place.
I agree that this is one of the greatest Sci-Fi stories on this site. It has all the character development, plot progression, and timing of a great story that you would want. The inquisitive and scientific mind of our hero gives an incredible opportunity for the story to explain situations that xxxecil uses greatly. My only complaint would involve the length of some portions of the story. Some parts, as great as they were, felt as though they weren't put together completely as the others were. I look forward to the next one. Thanks xxxecil.
I must say, I came early on reading the first, but felt compelled to keep reading since it was such a well written story, original and with an ending I wasn't able to predict like so many other stories. A+, would read again.
This story kept me glued to the screen for the entire evening. Your character development was excellent, and the plot/sub-plot were wonderful. Thanks for a great evening of entertainment!
I have to say, this is probably one of the hottest stories I have ever read, the descriptive nature is amazing, I look forward to your work if you make a sequel, you are easily the best Sci-Fi writer on this site.
Bravo... well done.. well crafted.. a delight to read a story so well crafted
Great story, I really like the viewpoint and how much it left to the imagination when having sex. You really set the mood well.
I would have liked slightly more graphic and grotesque descriptions specifically when you began to describe the lactating alien tits and such. A little more help in trying to describe something so alien, (texture of the liquids, colour). I appreciate how you added the smells.
Too much to ask for a little pain?
I like the easy going tone of the story. How there was no love or despair of jeolousy.
Keep it up.
I liked your story a great deal, but what's with the names???
Twas arousing and all that, but the names reduced me to inappropriate giggles.
"Pruhdd" galaxy, sector or whatever it was?!
Use some less silly names and the story will be so much greater! :-D
In case there is any confusion, this story should be added to the same series with Three-Hundred Million and Three-Hundred Million and One.
I just finished '300 million', and it was a ton of fun! It was a great mix of raunchy pulp sex with enough plot to keep me interested (I'm kinda picky, so that's not an empty statement) and a genuinely surprising twist ending.
I have a solid appreciation for unabashed sex fantasy, but I'm also an amateur writer and literary critic and I often find myself disappointed and disinterested in the writing on community-submission erotica sites like this one, but your story hit a great balance between writing quality and hedonism, I totally enjoyed it.
Keep up the good work!
It is very rare to find really really good science fiction sex stories.
And the good ones often have large amounts of language in them.
I truly believe you can have good sex stories with out cursing.
And this story does it well.
I do not write and have great appreciation for those who can.
Keep up the good work and keep making surprising endings.
I could not stop reading you did a great job on righting this story; I am gay and this was so hot to read I would love to read a gay version of this story.
keep up the great writing.
Wow.... Just amazing. And, honestly, though the sex was so common, it had a pretty okay plot and story! Keep up the amzing writing!
Dude. You have some serious issues