by nikkijames
I'm sure many will be eagerly awaiting part 2!! Good start!
great start to the story. lots of passion to come and i cant wait for part 2!! its made me soo horny, well done...
I'm drooling for more ... good character development and great imagery.
Once again you show you have a wonderful talent for story telling. I so love living vicariously through you. Please PLEASE don't stop.
You spun this tale very well. Your story and the anticipation of the final sexual climax is building up nicely.