All Comments on '4:20 P.M.'

I guess I don't understand. First she says, " I'm good. I know what I'm doing." She's a virgin?

Right after she says, ..." I'd never even touched a penis before I met my current boyfriend(PERIOD) "I just... I don't want my first time to be like this."

She says how good she is (which I might understand if she's trying to placate him) but then immediately tells him she'd never done it before.

She offers a blow job, then says, "I don't want this!" when she made the offer. So confusing.

"and I felt the skin peel under my nails." She's actually peeling his skin off? That would certainly break the mood.

" I just kept grinding and grinding and suddenly every muscle in my body relaxed."

Is that supposed to signal an orgasm? It sounds like you've never actually had one, because that's not it.

I like this style of story.

And I think it's poor confused anonymous who has probably never had an orgasm.