All Comments on '4 Moms 4 Aidan Ch. 01'

Would love to read how he fucks his friend's mothers when his friends are around

wonderfully done. Just the right. Length with a good pace. I enjoyed it from the beginning to the end. I'm looking so forward to the conquest of the other three. Thank you. Job well done.

thanks for a real passionate story, well written and plausible.

Lucky boy.

Can't wait for more.

series. Can't wait for the next installment!!

While it was a good read, there are a number of incorrect uses of tense. For example - a thousand times, but none match the reality. SHOULD read "...a thousand times, but none matched the reality."

Even if she is thinking similar, when they say no and stop, rape is rape. No matter how much you think they enjoy or want it.

Fantasy is fun, but when faced with reality of breaking vows, no means no.

Seduction must go both ways or this should go into the nonconsent category. Just saying.

Loved it . Looking forward to more of this story Keep them CUMMMMMMMINGGGG !!!!!

More tangled emotions and please make Aidan progressively more challenged with each quasi-mom /milf . I enjoyed the bike outing tryst as opposed to tired old home rondevous because friend and husband are absent.

Loved the story. Glad to see two more chapters written already. Hope the Milf's use a little more dirty talk when they fuck him in subsequent chapters. That's very hot.

Enjoyed the story but should be in NONCONSENT!

He raped his supposed best friends mother and someone he considered a mother!

Aiden is a messed up guy who thinks he can take whatever he wants! I can go on and on about how messed up he is .... But nobody here will care ... Just a good stroke story!

Like I said change the category and all my arguments will go away .

who can't cum in reality

If you don't believe me, just ask his wife, ex-wife. I gave this story a 5 for effort and content.

You have a talent for writing this kind of story. I found myself in envy of Aiden. I fucjed a friend's mother for a whole summer when I was in college. One of those fond memories that I will never forget. I can't wait the next one.

Good story so far. Needs better editing, e.g. peddling or pedalling?

There are all kinds of careless errors, listing every woman's bra size - and of course they're all stacked - boring and dumb.

I stopped reading at this point. The concept may have been good, but the execution was awful.

amoral beast is Aidan - pity - he does seem somewhat likeable in spite of his failings.

Get a fucking editor

The story isn't that bad,but your execution of it? Gimme a break

much rape...too bad

Descent but the whole rape and sociopathic personality was off putting. If the rest it is like this i have no reason to want to continue.

Are you so short that your characters have to be below 5'7"? Inferiority complex?

I want to give this story a chance, but everything I see of it is just god-awful. Aidanus just a dickhead, and he's treating these poor women like trophys. I couldn't even finish the first part and when I skipped to Ch. 10 it didn't seem any better. How are we supposed to like and relate to this absolutely awful human being. I think the premise was sound, but the author's determination to get us to hate him and his work got in the way.

It strains SoD a lot that the author keep writing protagonists with ridiculously large Dicks.

This is a fantasy about raping women. It's nothing more than rape. Disgusting.

Dudes a raging sociopath.. also rape fantasy much, nearly everything she said was some form of no..

Not good

I never made it passed what would equate to the first chapter let alone the first page...

How has this managed to score so well...?

The story is undoubtedly erotic, but the subject is deeply troubling. It almost amounts to incest as the boy regards her as a substitute mother. She says no many times but he continues to have sex with her.

Also, there are many grammatical and syntax errors in the story.

I look forward to the next installment!

An interesting read, to be sure... The flow of the story would have gone better if some serious proofreading had taken place, prior to hitting the send key.. For instance,

long-steamed roses, hilarious! Good grammar also helps with a good read.

While knowing absolutely nothing about your buddy Utamu, who may speak perfect English, I found it amusing to think that an individual of foreign descent was chosen to help write a story in English (not that he wouldn’t fit the bill, so don’t go getting insulted).

Anyhow, your work has a good story line and I enjoyed the idea of tagging a best friend’s hot mom. Hot moms always make it easier to maintain the wood...

Like the guy said...good stroke story. While I don't condone RAPE per se', C'mon peeps it's just a guys fantasy...besides, in the end she really enjoyed his fucking her. With just a very small amount of persuasion he was able to get her to remove her panties(bike shorts, et.al), got her to let him eat her pussy, and she wasn't really adamntly resisting him when he started fucking her...just worried that he wouldn't be careful with his long dick...That, and other than her guilty conscious after he busted his nut I didn't see anything that really in all reality constitute RAPE...C'mon, he actually just wore down her "resistance" as he was seducing her. I honestly believe, that Amanda would have been able to fend off, and Aidan would have taken a "serious" NO for an answer had he actually heard one coming from Amanda.

The only thing that makes this story so "boring" is he continually repeats himself(jackhammering her pussy, feeling himself cumming in seconds, etc.)so often. While I can tolerate to a degree a few syntax, and spelling errors, when they become numerous, and take away from the read, meh...What really adds to the story, and brings out the erotica is the diversity of the ladies/moms/MILFs...I guess just remembering my own young adult hood and how I like the variety of pussy available at the time really brings out the reason I enjoyed it. C'mon didn't we all as young men want to stick our hard cocks into a married pussy? Doesn't the idea of fucking a married woman entice you? I also liked the idea that he was trying to impregnate them all. To me that is exciting but very foolish for a boy/young man to do/try to do. I hate the fact that the writer gives away the fact that he has "short comings" in his own life, because of how small he makes all of his conquests. I am tall, over 6FT, so when a woman 5'10", or 11" wraps their legs around me while I am fucking them makes pussy feel so uch better.

Just a narcissistic asshole who is turning good married women into cheating sluts!!! Hope the husbands fix his ass in the end!!!

Wrong Category - this whould be in the RAPE section (or as Lit names it, 'non-consent')

I find it hard to read a story when I can't relate to or empathize with the MC. He just comes off as an arrogant prick going around cherry popping and picking out his friends moms to add a couple more notches to his bead post, showing complete disrespect for the women who practically raised him. Douchebag through and through.

**Force sex is not cool. Sorry

Wow! Great story and looking forward to reading the entire series..........():\

You really need to learn how to use commas properly

The sexscenes are nice. But I don't agree with how the MC acts. It would've been better I think if he was shy instead of a player/dick.