All Comments on '420'

I thought the story was going to be erotic. I cracked up instead. Thank you for this funny short story. I laughed all the way through. Good one, dude!

It made me wet, but at the same time I was laughing. You have a way with words to make it both funny and arousing.

I look forward to reading more of your work in the future.

A very well written story and quite amusing.

You're an imaginative writer but that was an incredibly dumb fucking story line. Put more effort into your descriptions of the sex act and their sensations. You left that part really lacking. The only thing you mentioned was that the mother's pussy was very tight. Ok... fine... but what was that fine, tight pussy doing to his cock and what were his reactions. Where's the description of his sensation, how hard his orgasm hit him and how hard he came into her?

I think some women might appreciate 7 whole minutes. Creative title.

fucking rubish

Not anounce of reality...