All Comments on '4620 Main Street'

Awesome story! I wish there was more! The characters are so believable! I'm surprised no one else has commented yet!

the characters are neat, and it's easy to relate to them and the story flows smoothly too. please write some more!

I enjoyed this story very much. It was sweet and fun and really good.

Keep it up!

You wrote it as if I was the one experiencing life in the small town. Excellent! Thank you for sharing with us.

I really like these characters and the set up you've given them. Perhaps there is more of their story to tell.

On a scale of one to five, that was at least a ten! Every bit was well handled: the nostalgia, the feeling of liking a morning out with best friend Shanie, yet wishing she'd disappear, feeling like an anachronism in the dressing room, walking around town with Wayne, and finally the wonderful lovemaking scene. You are a very complete writer, able to do justice to every detail of a story, far more accomplished than most. I'm delighted to have found your works, and plan to enjoy every one.

Found your work today and will read every last story, and want for more.

Enjoyed every written word.