All Comments on '48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 12: Lisa'

I love your way of weaving a good story line into the age-old harem tale. The group display at the end was quite stimulating!

The harem story is wonderfull. Please go on!

Is this the last Lisa story? I've only read the couple chapters you had for her and when I searched through the titles I didn't see any more that said Lisa at the end. Will you continue her story?

I'm glad you like the story! This is very likely the last entry for Lisa for two main reasons. I decided to stop writing before I ran out of ideas and 'jumped the shark.' I tried to fashion an ending for each girl, Autumn and Lisa, that would at least allow the reader to imagine a stable future for them. Autumn started a year's journey to possible freedom and Lisa formed a supportive friendship with Tala, making it at least plausible that she will accept her situation.

The other reason is that I have turned the 48 Hours series over to coauthors J Spe and Taliesin1. They write Julie's story in a very different style than mine as you may have noticed. Thank you for your support!