All Comments on '48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 29: Three'

by Carole99

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 7 years ago
Being honest

At last some much needed friction. Julie has become a cloned brainwashed doormat despite the odd poke to the ribs otherwise.

This is non con reluctance and truthfully, as well written as it is it has become very ...yes sir, this slave will etc etc.

Can we have some fight and fuck you please.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Drogheda!

Well done side story. The name reminded me of The Thornbirds. Father Ralph, you dirty old man. You waited 40 years to nail her!

Carole99Carole99over 7 years agoAuthor
Correction and Mea Culpa

During the intricacies of submission of this Part, we didn't quite get the pen name of our collaborator correct. Sorry about that! Taliesin1 is the correct name for the author of The Story of Three.

-- J Spe

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