All Comments on '48 Hours on Blue Bayou Pt. 35: Julie'

Her ruminations on being a slave were much needed as she had basically turned into a " yes master, no master " robot. I keep reading because the story is good but also in the hope of getting some rebellion and friction.

Just my thoughts.

I'm in agreement with Masterjim, a bit of rebellion from Julie or anyone would be good or a too good an opportunity to escape scenario but then I'm a sucker for punishment.

I wouldn't worry about the harsh comment, as we say in Liverpool, some people are cunts but that denotes they have some character, to their personality this commenter is commonly known as a cockwhiff! Ugh. I have to agree!

Overall I found this a really nice chapter, the prose flew smoothly being as usual a pleasure to read and the erotica scenes were as always well done,

This chapter really did step the bar up in terms of story quality with Julie taking a moment to ruminate on her status and her future, I liked this, a lot. I feel her conclusions were a bit off, especially with how unpleasently her master has treated her and the constantly over the top punishments but overall having deeper thoughts from the character is something we haven't seen in a hood many chapters.

I didn't like the caning or the "stolen" orgasm, the way that slave rules are treated as ubiquitous between all owners seems odd and I've made this comment before in regards to the ever present "slave corridors". I say this as different rules between masters offers more options and puts Julie much more in an unknown state when otherwise this far into her slavery Julie should probably be (and in my opinion with how over the top she can be) a wonder slave, practically robotic, which sort of detracts from a long running character story. Plus orgasms are an autonomic function brutal punishment for being forced into one seems unnecessary to say the least and the sort of treatment that if repeated leads to despondant "shut down" slave girls. (I know this is a bit rambly and sounds like a major complaint but I should reiterate I really do enjoy this story, the writing is of a very high quality and I only hope to help sharpen / make you think further in regards what you already produce).

As to what I'd like to see next, honestly I'd really like to see some nice things happen to Julie because the constant cycle of punishment and no rewards for Julie just seem sad and only lessens the impact of the punishments. Additionally I'd love to see more scenes between Julie and her master as despite apparantly being his personal slave girl they seem to have very little interaction throughout the story that makes her master feel extremely disposable in narrative terms. Oh and also petplay / collars and leashes and hand feeding, etc because that was super cute back on the boat right and the begining of the story and I'd just love to see more of that even if we got some of those elements with the Russians.

Still loving the story, keep up the good work :)

5/5 Stars

Thanks for your thoughtful comment. We are always gratified when readers get into the details of a story instead of just skimming through to the 'good parts!'

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I loved this section of Julies story and the coming together of the slaves and Russians. The really touching parts were the dancing together as couples, and when the Russians were thoughtful enough to bring the ladies ice cream. (how totally thoughtful)

Julie was happy with these guys and I hope there is an opportunity for her to be sold to them. Thank you for this wonderful story.