by LiseKLord
really hope to see more.. perhaps arrival permanent marking and even water sports
It reminds me of the woman I have found by the way of the internet. Her beauty is perfect as well as her body. But her spirit to be Mastered and to serve her Master is satisfying to every point. Her need to be punished is insatiable and so we are perfect for each other. Sincerely, Lord R.
Fantastic story will read more.
Love slave,ss etc this has it all.
The Mistress is taking credit for #4's abilities and natural inclinations. This is Mistress being a liar and a jerk.
Real kidnapping, slave training, real slave auctions?
there is a big difference between BDSM with consent and actual kidnapping and slavery. Although it doesn't apply to the main character...well actually it does because she has no say in being sold to whom, she has not had the chance to enter into a contract with expectations, responsibilities and limits.
Are we to assume she has no family, no life, job apartment or anything else? seriously? If it the experience she wants, great, but it takes a little time and setup to make it work.
I feel this is probably in the wrong category and should probably be in Non Con instead. A lot of good stuff in here but too much of a Non Con overtone for my taste, sorry.