All Comments on '50 Shades Of Pale Pink Sissy Ch. 02'

by davine

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FA_JFFA_JFalmost 11 years ago
Wow

She went back, and rather easily. Too trusting, too soon. Master has issues and hangs with a certifiable crowd. I worry for her. I don't see this ending well.

Also, perhaps a tag for actual castration? That's a bit more than spanking and humiliation, which got tags, and 'modification' doesn't quite do it justice.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Please continue

I like the writing and quite like the plot.

I would like to read more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
can't wait.....

I'm excited for the rest i'd like to know what happens to her and about the castration. Hope you continue soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

cannot wait for the next episode such a lovely story, such a lucky girl

ColonelinguistColonelinguist12 months ago

I loved this and I hated it at the same time, so your warped and perverted tale gets five stars from me Davine.

Why? Well for one, aside from some minor spelling errors, it was well written; and extremely so. Next, it has stirred some hidden ( and sometimes disturbing ) emotions In me I’m still trying to work out. Sex in these times can be extremely complicated, unless your lucky enough to find a ‘good fit,’ so make sure you aren’t being covertly photographed or filmed - that shit could end up on Facebook, or some other social media platform before you take off those high-heels, honey!

And I have been fondle my rock hard cock through much of the time I have spent reading ‘50 Shades of…’ thus far - and isn’t that what pervs like me come here to begin with? So in one sense, I’ve been sexually sated for a time being, thank you.

Actually, I’m not into S&M, which is why I hate how much I’ve enjoyed it so far - believe me, I get it, but ( tragically) Toni has confused her low self esteem with love - and although I find ‘Master Black’ to be a contemptible character, I agree with his Assessment that often great pleasure is accompanied by great pain.

I’ve come to empathize with Antoinnette in some twisted ways - any guy who’s ever dawned his mum’s panties and her CFM’s, wonders at some point, how much getting fucked by a decent sized cock really, really good might hurt her/his little boi pussy, and whether or not ‘her’ eventual pleasure could make it all worth-while - and most of them will never know - so they’ll find stories like ‘50 Shades of…’ in order to experience it vicariously through characters like ‘Antoinette!’

That being said, I can hardly wait to read the next part.

SissyBoy1WarszawaSissyBoy1Warszawa8 months ago

I won't say that I liked everything, but I am under the spell of your story-writing Davin. I really liked the scenes where Antoinette (Tony) Hazel was home alone and kept thinking about her Mr. Black and she is also afraid of this terrible humiliation in front of other people, fear of terrible pain ... And also that she will lose the person she loves infatuated or maybe in love. Although I do not like the character of Mr. Black very much, he is too brutal and even worse, sadistic but he has flashes of kindness, a gracious eye because it is difficult to find love with him. I don't think I would have believed, much less loved, such a person as you have presented in your story so far. I see Mrs. Rebecca and Mrs. Jane as villains even more sadistic. Maybe it's just my opinion, but after my experiences, I am afraid of such people and avoid them as much as possible, although I would like to have my Mrs. or Mrs. You describe the sex scenes both Antoinette with her Master and with Mrs. Jane's sex toy, Toy, wonderfully. I would love to be Antoinette but in a really warm, nice, even loving SissyBoy, and I certainly wouldn't want to be neutered. I wonder what will become of Antoinette, what fate awaits her? What else will she experience and how much pain, humiliation will she have to endure for Mr. Black to see her as someone more than a toy, an erotic slave, and even someone more than a Sissy? SissyBoy from Warsaw, Poland. 📖🧒🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👧🏻❤️👧🏻

ps. Sorry for grammatical errors and inaccuracies, but I don't speak English.

Nie powiem że wszystko Mi się podobało, ale jestem pod czarem Twojego Davine pisania historii-opowiadania. Bardzo podobały Mi się sceny gdy Antoinette (Tony) Hazel był/a sama w domu i wciąż wracała myślami do swojego Pana Blacka oraz również boi się tego strasznego poniżenia przed innymi osobami, strach przed strasznym bólem... A również że straci osobą w której się zauroczył a może zakochał. Choć bardzo nie odpowiada Mi postać Pana Blacka jest zbyt brutalny a nawet powiem coś gorzej, sadystyczny ale ma w sobie przebłyski dobroci, łaskawego oka bo trudno znaleźć u niego miłość. Ja chyba nie uwierzyła bym a tym bardziej nie pokochała bym takiej osoby jaką do tej pory przedstawiłeś w swojej historii. Jeszcze bardziej widzę jako czarne charaktery a wręcz sadystyczne są Pani Rebecca i Pani Jane. Może to tylko moja ocena ale po swoich doświadczeniach, przeżyciach boję się takich osób i unikam jak najbardziej mogę, choć chciał/a bym mieć swoją/ego Panią czy Pana. Wspaniale opisujesz sceny seksu zarówno Antoinette ze swoim Panem, jak i z zabawką erotyczną Pani Jane, Toy'ą. Bardzo chciał/a bym być Antoinette ale w naprawdę ciepłej, miłej, wręcz być kochaną/ym SissyBoy, i na pewno nie chciał/a bym być wykastrowana. Zastanawiam się co stanie się z Antoinette, jaki czeka ją los? Czego jeszcze doświadczy i jak wielki ból, poniżenie będzie musiała znieść aby Pan Black zobaczył w niej kogoś więcej niż zabawkę, niewolnika erotycznego, a nawet kogoś więcej niż Sissy? SissyBoy z Warszawy, Polska. 📖🧒🏻👨‍❤️‍👨👧🏻❤️👧🏻

ps. Przepraszam za błędy i niedokładności językowe ale nie znam języka angielskiego.

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