All Comments on '500 Miles and 6 Floors Ch. 01'

Sweet!

I see that you are new on the site and this is your first story.

Well done keep up the good work.

You have a nice way of telling a story that makes it quite credible

Hi

Is this really yur first ?

You have great writing skills

Please keep on writing. .The story is fantastic

Thanks for sharing

Really good plot and nice details.Get an editor and it will be perfect...

Excellent first chapter and story. Nice plot and loved the way the story unfolded :-)

I love the dialogue.

Great first story! Loved the buildup to the sex. All sounded very credible throughout the story. Some very small grammatical errors but nothing you don't often find in electronic books from very successful authors. Keep writing! I look forward to more stories from you!

Some issues, but we'll talk about them.

You do a very nice job using dialogue to tell their stories and build tension. And the situation seems "real" enough. Kudos!

Gotta take some time before going on. But looking forward to a slow journey with these two.

Thanks!

A great opening chapter, promises much for the rest of the story. I loved how the characters were brought together and their first loving making session was just about perfect. I will look forward with relish to part two. 5 stars