by sdsioux
I think that before you submit a story which, in itself , wasn't bad, you should get someone you trust to PROOF READ IT. One moment the girl gets into the car you wtote," I continued with the breast worship as she pulled her SKIRT and panties off ." then after you amd she had finished your performance you once again wrote, " . . . put her blouse, panties, and PANTS back on".
God I love your stories, wish you lived in Phoenix...