All Comments on '750-10 Captain Scarlet and Pandora'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy3 months ago

I was waiting for two twins to pop up and yell, Bug, Bug! Bug, Bug!

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WhitewaterbumWhitewaterbum3 months ago

I’m sitting here stunned!!! That was the biggest TEASE for a reader like me. A hundred plot lines are running through my brain. How did he lose eye. What type of spacecraft was in command of to save the western part of the solar system. The femme fatale named Pandora could only mean many twists in their relationship. And finally Capt Scarlett ( I felt I’ve read into an Errol Flynn story with swashbuckling action sequences. Please, please don’t let this be alone shot story!!!

DuleighDuleigh3 months agoAuthor

Yes, this is a tease for 2 stories that will be coming out for Geek Pride

Captain Scarlett Saves Mars!

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Captain Scarlett vs The Scrapper!

WantingToWriteGoodWantingToWriteGood3 months ago

Loved how they overcame a zero gravity environment. First solution I have ever read about the problem. Excellent story.

lAnatomistelAnatomiste3 months ago

What Whitewaterbum Said!

Wonderful teaser!

Campus77Campus773 months ago

A good tease. It's been a while since you have delved into sci/fi. This sounds like an action movie script. I've always wondered how to make love in zero gravity. NASA has never given a hint about that being an experiment. Will look forward to the two coming attractions.

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Not much of a story. Even for a 750 word item, nothing happens.

DuleighDuleigh3 months agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous - what did you expect to see in 750 words? Retelling the Battle of Mordor? I planned on that but everyone is doing it.

intim8intim8about 2 months ago

Scarlett and Vermillion, is there a pattern here?

DuleighDuleighabout 2 months agoAuthor

Yes there is a pattern. Pandora has a sister named Eris (pattern) Cameron (another pattern) Their stories are ready for the Geek Pride event

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