All Comments on '867-5309'

I always wondered what would happen if I called that number... Great read. I only wish my 1982 was that horny!

I really really enjoyed this... I wish you would write another chapter, maybe about when they visit Jenny. Thank you for writing!!! :D

Maybe just a little too short. Maybe a little more development about Sheila and Ellie's friendship and a little more sex, but overall I liked it. Fun and original idea. Good job overall.

Really. Just a big, hearty, belly laugh is what happened when I got to the end of the story. Nicely done (again).

Sheila and Ellie's visit to Jenny would be a fun read.

Maybe I should test this

wish I had a friend like this to call.

Why does she advertise her phone number? Because we need to call her. We need somebody to create sex slaves out of annoying teens. Jenny is not the hero this town needs. But the one it deserves.

Mmmmmm this is nice i hope there is another part where they go to visit her that would be so hot

It was alright.

First of all, i cant believe no ones thought of this until now, including me lol. Second, this was incredibly hot. I love it when these stories take their time, far too many rush to the character admitting their being controlled, and giving in.

Well written with a completely different approach. I hope the author decides to expand the story, I want read more!

I love how this story is structured, looking back at the past. Very sexy, yet teasing. The mind control is subtle, yet feels inevitable.

I really feel like Ellie was a great narrator, point of view. It felt fleshed out enough, and real from an 18 year old from 1982.

I would love to see more of Jenny!