All Comments on 'A Baby for Tina'

I enjoyed reading your story.

Wonderful story!!!!!!

Quite an enjoyable story. Thanks.

The female perspective of writing really can shine and here is a great example! Enjoyable even if it was a wee bit long but it never lagged or got stale. Erotic, sexy and kept me engaged with some cool curves and small twists.

Another superb contributor to add to my favorites!! Bravo!

The best story on Literotica for me! I love the plot and the sexual heat between Tina and Brad! Magic!

Awesome story and yes, the transition you were concerned about was virtually seamless......Hope to see another story soon!

You both did a remarkable job on this story.Yes the transition was virtually seamless.Bravo to you both.

More of a fuck and suck story.

Nice try, but not quite.

A clone of your husband, but with all the problems fixed!

Dumped the pills in the toilet, BAD DOCTOR, BAD

Horrible, that gets processed as someone else down-streams drinking water, with the meds still intact.

On Lit some people read for a cheap thrill,there is something on Lit for all,this story is for people who can appreciate a deeper more heartfelt story that has meaning,pathos,hope joy,a love of life and living that trancends the depths of despair felt by some of us at times,would that I could give more than 5 stars,a truly wonderful tale,thank you both...Jay.

nice job - really really enjoyed this story. I'll be looking for more stories by you

This would have been a good love story even without the great sex!!! Good job!!!

She wants to get pregnant but uses condoms and birth control for four years. Huh!

Tina's dialogue - and the timing of it over a year - made this a page-turner for me. Nicely done.

This is TopShelf story, I dare any one to say different. Wow! What a beautiful ending! A dream come true! Love you all! Bye.

Magic

HP

You can Write! I love this story. The beginning tore at my heart and tears. Simple story line with finesse and a terrific Happy Ending. Doesn't get any better. Keep up the good work!

From this story I loved the beginning and the end. The explicit sex part was very hot, but excessive for my personal taste. The part where Tina asks Brad to dominate her and talk dirty to her I did not like it, I had the feeling that it was humiliating for both of them (it's not a negative criticism, it's my humble opinion). As an inveterate romantic, I am bothered by the excess of sex on the romantic side of the story, I believe that sex must be a complement, not the basis of the story.

Even so, the story is very good, and I appreciate the work of the author, so I give some more than deserved 5 *.

Please do not go crazy with my review, it is a personal opinion exclusively, about a good story, romantic and very sexy.

I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.

I loved this story!!! Just a wonderful read, so full of emotion, I loved all of it! Please keep writing, I love your work!!

But I don't care for the dirty talk and fantasy of getting screwed by several guys. To me it shows a lack of love or at least no real true love.

Brad is a bit weird, I know of no guy who would think that it was okay for their new lover to give the old one a going away bj. Even less be happy about it.

How can such a sad story make you feel good? But it does, so when I want to just feel good I read this one. It's one of my all time favorites. Thank You so much Author.

Johnny

It wasn't a biggie for me, but a negative. I also didn't like the comment that the Island house could accommodate 8 if they were very close which hinted at swapping. that would prove to me absolutely that there was ZERO true love in the relationship. The last negative just for me is shaved bare pussy. I greatly prefer a hairy trimmed lady NOT a little girl. If I don't get a few hairs in my teeth I feel I didn't eat pussy. But the story is one of my all time favorites and I have read it several times. Thank you so much Author!

Johnny (Yep I read it again, love it!)

But the Exhibitionism bothered me. It shows an extreme lack of "True Love" How does letting other men see your nude wife or girlfriend become OK??? The comment about 8 couples if they are special hints very strongly at swapping. That absolutely KILLS this story as a Romance. So IF you write another chapter with your hints call it a Loving Wives story and destroy LOVE. it would be just another fuck story extremely common on this web site. SHAME ON YOU AUTHOR. I almost gave you a 1 star just to vote...NOW I question if you know what true love even means...

Thanks for the wonderful story. I am a sucker for a happy ending!! I would love to read more of your stories.

Thanks

I's a sad story, but it's also a true love story. Both writers parts meld together perfectly. Sad, but also a feel good story and I love it. Thank you so very much authors.

Jgstansell@yahoo.com

Why? They both wanted children. He was now 45 so she must have been close to that. In 4 years they could have had at least two easily. So now baby has to grow up with old people and not likely to see grand kids and certainly not see them grow up. Me and my wife married late and the kids married even later so we might see them grow up. But sadly we aren't likely to ever see a great grand baby.

Comment number who knows...The only flaw I see is Brad is to old, so the love scene is NOT likely. Last longer if older natural, but usually one and done. It gets worse for older fuckers. I quit reading older men young women...when she reaches sexual prime and ready to rock and roll he is ready to roll over and go to sleep.

Interesting premise.

But the sex didn't do it for me. It was too mechanical. No slow buildup. No extended foreplay.

Perhaps I missed it because I wasn't really into it, but if she wanted to get pregnant, I simply don't understand why it was important that he had (and used) a condom. Huh?

Frankly, I didn't get past page 3.

Three stars.

I have a hard time believing that the main character doesn’t know what her husband’s twin brother does for a living. The fact that she’d rather be known for giving a great blow job than for being a successful doctor is horrible. Crap characters.

So many of the stories have segments where either the man or the woman are complete jerks, and they find a way to reconcile. In this story it was all upbeat (her thoughts of suicide from grief added to the story- and as a practicing physician it sounded realistic!)

Thanks!!

I really enjoyed reading this story. Loved the characters and the premise. Only flaw i see is the ages. Would have preferred her and him being closer in age early 30's. But that didn't take away from quality of the story.

Easily 5/5 for me

ew, why was he okay with her giving the dude a blowjob as a goodbye gift? what the fuck? that’s disgusting, especially if they want to start a relationship. next chapter gonna end up in the loving wives section after she decides to get pregnant with the other doctors baby like the whore she is

The way Tina screwed Brad in the first night you would think she never had sex for the 6 months since Tim died yet she was whoring with John!! Tina is just a slut!!

WHORE TINA WANTED HIS BABY YET HE HAD TO USE CONDOMS....WHAT A USER BITCH....SHE SHOULD LET FUCKTOY JOHN GET HER PREGNANT....SLUT.......BILLIONAIRE BRAD DESERVED BETTER THAN THE WHORE TINA

THE WHORE GIVES JOHN A BLOW JOB AS A CONSOLATION PRIZE AFTER BRAD TOLD THE SLUT AT THE AIRPORT TO END RELATIONS......SHE IS JUST A WHORE....WHY THE FUCK IS THIS STORY IN ROMANCE....SHE IS A MAN CRAZY WHORE....SURPRISED SHE WAS BOT CHEATING ON TIM!!

WRITER REALLY FUCKED UP THIS STORY WITH A WHORE TINA

SHE IS ON BIRTH CONTROL YET SHE WANTED HIS BABY!!

HOW CAN SHE BE SUICIDAL WHEN SHE WAS FUCKING JOHN!!

THIS STUPID STORY MAKES NO FUCKING SENSE

Worth 2 stars!! So much inconsistency, a confused whore of a Doctor

To the Anon “SHOUTING”, fine you didn’t like it, but wind your neck in and be constructive or insightful, not cursing and abusing, don’t forget - you were the one that kept reading it, not us. I’m sure your your Mother told “if you have nothing nice to say, don’t say anything at all.”

Tina was too slutty for me. Did not feel like a romance story, at all.

Those with unreasoning criticism have no understanding of the human condition. We are all flawed and require the compassion and forebearance of those we love. I see two plausible, relatable people, groping their way in limited visibility to a happy ending. 5 stars.

Very enjoyable story for the most part. I loved the first page and most of the rest, but their first encounter wasn't really turned me off and made me question whether I wanted to continue. Considering their relationship up to that point and the pain they both felt as Tim's loss, would a couple really act like that? Perhaps it's just a different generation, but it turned me off for a while. Fortunately, I kept reading after a break and the rest was better and it ended well.

You need to drop John from the story. I can understand Tina's "Passion". I knew at the start they would marry. The sex was a little over the top for a grieving wife and brother. The relation is too based on sex, may not last but the baby may help keep them together. A romance story not sure. 3 maybe 4 stars

Not my usual type of story that I read...but a pleasant Saturday morning tale of romance and sex...

Great fun...thanks!

Not sure why this was considered for some award, as it is just too discombobulated. Neither one of you are a very good writer. You both are all over the place and there is no consistancy in the story and romance and erotica really is not there. too confusing.................

This is not a romance... It's a typical whore story.

Come on! A farewell bj?? I don't think I enjoyed it. 1*

The only thing I didn't like was they were both too old.