All Comments on 'A Bad Boy'

by fukensploogin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
nice

I loooved your story darling....

SweetWitchSweetWitchalmost 18 years ago
Returning the favor

You left me feedback so I thought I would return the favor. Nicely written. Your Jonny reminded me of someone who used to date my college roommate. He was most believable. Good work.

SW

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
johnny boy

loved this story !

i had a great image of mister Johnny Depp in my head

TanukiTanukiover 17 years ago
Very well written!

Although the premise is a bit too mundane for my twisted taste, :) i got into it cause it's really well written - natural realistic characters and just the right amount of description in the sex scene. I don't know why this story doesn't have an H next to it?

rena_oldshandsrena_oldshandsabout 17 years ago
LOVED IT!

I loved it, loved it, and loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Nice

I think we all have wanted to be Jhonny at some point in our lives. I loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Wicked story, dude.

I really like how your stories are not especially twisted or fetishy or anything, but still pretty hot. Everyone who has been around that age, especially if they went to university has experienced the sort of thing that goes on in your stories or has wanted to.

I think your stories tend to appeal to a younger audience.

Good work man.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
hmmmm

I thought you didn't get high the first time you smoke weed

LittleInnocentAngelLittleInnocentAngelover 16 years ago
fantastic

i loved the story! it was so hot, keep up the brilliant work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
AMAZING

Dude, that was SO hot. I SO want to be that girl. Please write more stories along these lines! xxxx

princesssexciprincesssexciover 15 years ago
Loved it

You are such a good writer, no wonder I love rping with you ^.^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Hawt!

I absolutely loved it! I really wanted to be the girl and the guy was very realistic, everyone knows a bad boy. I think it appealed to me most because I'm not long out of my college days...the memories :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awesome

I loved your story- Johnny was so fuckin sexy. My only suggestion is that you keep the dialogue, especially the girl's, more realistic. It was a great story though!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago

so damn hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago

wow!!! that had me sooo wet!!! i loved it!

--- jessica <3

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice c:

fucking so sexy c:

Idk what it was about it, so realistic, just so nice

I really felt like i was lauren! Bravo

indefinable1indefinable1over 13 years ago
yum

all of us women love bad boys - it's in human nature - very hot -

KandiikissesKandiikissesover 13 years ago

damn thats hot!! what can i say i have a thing for bad boys and your storie was perfect

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

wow that was sexy as hell. i have always loved the bad boys myself ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow

LOOOOVE IT!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
ROTFLMAO

this is an awesome story!!! I love it from start to end!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Yummy

This had me so wet... Wish i was her

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Damn I want my crush to do this to me. Mmm.

valeto9valeto9almost 12 years ago
why?

why cant shit like this happen to me? seriously? loved this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

It was a good story and very well written but I have one complaint pot isn't a mind altering drug. And when you get high you really don't want to do anything except eat it makes you super lazy. But other wise it was an excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

Hot as hell

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow

That was fucking awesome! damn I'd love for that to happen!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Fuck yeah

Shit after reading this I just had a fantasy about my crush doing that to me 😂 I would've loved it if my crush fucked me like that. Knowing when I say no he'll say fuck yeah.... Wow I'm weird. ;) . This made me wet... So Fucking Wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Me too!

That's exactly what I want my crush to do to me.

Fuck me that was affective!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

Low-key something I'd do. Hot af.

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