by fukensploogin
You left me feedback so I thought I would return the favor. Nicely written. Your Jonny reminded me of someone who used to date my college roommate. He was most believable. Good work.
SW
loved this story !
i had a great image of mister Johnny Depp in my head
Although the premise is a bit too mundane for my twisted taste, :) i got into it cause it's really well written - natural realistic characters and just the right amount of description in the sex scene. I don't know why this story doesn't have an H next to it?
I think we all have wanted to be Jhonny at some point in our lives. I loved it.
I really like how your stories are not especially twisted or fetishy or anything, but still pretty hot. Everyone who has been around that age, especially if they went to university has experienced the sort of thing that goes on in your stories or has wanted to.
I think your stories tend to appeal to a younger audience.
Good work man.
i loved the story! it was so hot, keep up the brilliant work
Dude, that was SO hot. I SO want to be that girl. Please write more stories along these lines! xxxx
You are such a good writer, no wonder I love rping with you ^.^
I absolutely loved it! I really wanted to be the girl and the guy was very realistic, everyone knows a bad boy. I think it appealed to me most because I'm not long out of my college days...the memories :)
I loved your story- Johnny was so fuckin sexy. My only suggestion is that you keep the dialogue, especially the girl's, more realistic. It was a great story though!
fucking so sexy c:
Idk what it was about it, so realistic, just so nice
I really felt like i was lauren! Bravo
damn thats hot!! what can i say i have a thing for bad boys and your storie was perfect
It was a good story and very well written but I have one complaint pot isn't a mind altering drug. And when you get high you really don't want to do anything except eat it makes you super lazy. But other wise it was an excellent story
Shit after reading this I just had a fantasy about my crush doing that to me 😂 I would've loved it if my crush fucked me like that. Knowing when I say no he'll say fuck yeah.... Wow I'm weird. ;) . This made me wet... So Fucking Wet
That's exactly what I want my crush to do to me.
Fuck me that was affective!