All Comments on 'A "Bad" Day: Day 04'

Who does she fuck first? I dropped 3 stars because she could not make a decision.

Does she have a cock and a vagina?

I am disappointed she did not tell Mike she loved him and FUCK HIM.---3 STARS

Too many people

1) fuck mike is my first choice and a drop to 3 stars

2) Abby must be bi. She was fucking somebody and we do not know who. Is she lez with Wendy or fucking a male, maybe her Dad or even sneaking over and fucking Wendy's Dad

3) Vanessa being a lover. What are her feelings?

4) Reuben - where does he show up.

5) Josh needs to be castrated

Wish I had not started the story. Left me disappointed.

@prop69

Wendy only has a cock, in the beginning chapters she called it her girl cock but after Vanessa called it her clit she adopted that.

Somethings you brought up are going to be covered in the next chapter. I'm finding that the biggest issue I have with the way I am writing this is my over planning and trying to draw it out to be a compelling story with a robust cast of characters. It might have been a bit ambitious for my first story.

I ask that you stay with me for at least one more chapter.

As the sexy man of the pair, please give Mike a dusting of chest hair, and perhaps a treasure trail leading to his pubes. I admire Mike, and want him to tell Wendy that he loves her and wants to make love to her.