All Comments on 'A Bargain Made: A House Fallen Ch. 05'
by SaddleRider
- 5 Comments
SaddleRideralmost 8 years agoAuthor,,,for the enthusiasm.
The last three chapters are simply awaiting approval before being posted, so you shouldn't have to wait long. :)
Anonymousalmost 8 years agoThis could have easily been a throw away chapter but even here you build the characters making them more endearing, I am honestly extremely impressed with your skill as a writer.
ThePlatinumDragonover 6 years agoI have read each chapter of your series up to this point, and I think this is the finest one I've read yet. You did a fantastic job of creating the emotional drama between Neral and her mother and capturing the emotional tension between them. Very well done.
nthusiasticabout 2 years agoI could empathize with them, both as the mother and as the daughter. I’ve been there. I only wish our differences could have been resolved as amicably. Emotional without becoming maudlin. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.
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