All Comments on 'A Bargain Made Ch. 01'

What a fantastic narration

wish ww can have more chapters

thanks for sharing

Neo

I really enjoyed this. It slowly drew me into the characters but left me anticipating the next chapter of this saga.

SaddleRider, this is a brilliant piece of work, absolutely brilliant. Please continue.

Dark Moon

Halfway through page 2 I realized that I have read this story before. Did you publish this story on another site? Are you the real author?

and Saddle Rider at the site where you read the story. I post at mcstories as well, but though to share them here to get a bit more feedback. So, yes, I am the actual author. If you've seen them anywhere other than here or there, they aren't authorized by me to be there.

Too often I read stories that don't understand that you have to build the world and characters in it to make a great story. Teasing just enough to make me want to continue reading. You have done that so well in such a short amount of time, I look forward to more.

Wow! Can't wait for the next

I’m thrilled to be starting this whole series again, and it’s even better than I remembered! Woohoo!

I am always thrilled when I stumble across something this good that is also quite lengthy. I do feel bad that I never saw it sooner but then that is my cross to bear but considering the quantity of stories and the new ones being added daily, I guess it does make sense that I might miss something that is 10+ years old or thereabouts. The only good thing I have learned regarding something like this is that whenever I read a story that is new and very well crafted, I make sure to go back and look at all their stories and sometimes even check other story sites. It has paid off multiple times just like it has this time. I am also excited that I get to binge read all the good things that have been created and posted over the years without having to wait for a next chapter to be posted. In all seriousness though, thank you for all the time and effort you put into creating these literary gems and then posting them to be enjoyed by all. It is greatly appreciated.

Stay safe and be well

J.D.

Mrs Sally Rider, I have read all of your stories. You are one of the few writers who bring a maturing plot and unique perspective in a series format. Keep writing no matter the platform. Thanks!

Nice build up